I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ella-May. Ka pai for posting your lockdown reflection to your blog. Sleeping in was also a positive for me. I think it would be good if you added some more ideas to the bullet points that you have. I can help you with that. Because you have embedded the Google Drawing, you can update it straight on there. Did you have Taco Bell in Level 4?
Kia Ora Ella-May it is Daisy here. This is really cool and I love the colour for the background. Why was you had to do the cleaning in your interesting column?
Hi Ella-may, I lke your drawing. It reminds me about Some of the google drawing I made. Maybe you could try thinking about so more reasons. What is a Lockdown Period?
Hello there Ella-may I have seen your blog post it is AMAZING. maybe next time you can add more like on the reflection and maybe you can add a little bit more on your reflection I was hoping you could add more on it but your don't have to. I really love how you said you had ice cream but what ice cream did you have Ella-may what kind? I like to sleep a lot to I sleeped at lot in the lockdown. did you do anything else you did in the lockdown? I hope you can tell me more about the lockdown you had. bye From: Marsali
Kia Ora Ella-Mey, I like your thinking when you put the photo of your work on your blog. I think that putting more writing on your blog would make it even more better! It was amazing though! Do you think your Lockdown was fun??
Kia ora Ella-May.
ReplyDeleteKa pai for posting your lockdown reflection to your blog.
Sleeping in was also a positive for me. I think it would be good if you added some more ideas to the bullet points that you have. I can help you with that. Because you have embedded the Google Drawing, you can update it straight on there.
Did you have Taco Bell in Level 4?
no i had taco ball in level two but yeah i will add more ideas . yes sleeping i was good so yeah .
DeleteKia Ora Ella-May it is Daisy here.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool and I love the colour for the background.
Why was you had to do the cleaning in your interesting column?
Kia Ora Ella-May Olivia Here.
ReplyDeleteI really the colour you used they are cool.
next time you could add a little more writing.
Kia Ora Ella-May,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added Miss Waho in there! Maybe remove some of the dots that are left over?
Hi Ella-May, I like the way you did a quality blog post. Next time you could remove the extru dots. How is cleaning interesting
ReplyDeleteHi Ella-may, I lke your drawing. It reminds me about Some of the google drawing I made. Maybe you could try thinking about so more reasons. What is a Lockdown Period?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ella-May,
ReplyDeleteI love your post. I think next time you should add logos of the things you like. What was your favorite thing to do?
Kia ora.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog. Next time, it would be good if you could say a bit more.
thanks for coming on my blog ok .
ReplyDeleteHello there Ella-may I have seen your blog post it is AMAZING.
ReplyDeletemaybe next time you can add more like on the reflection and maybe you can add a little bit more on your reflection I was hoping you could add more on it but your don't have to. I really love how you said you had ice cream but what ice cream did you have Ella-may what kind? I like to sleep a lot to I sleeped at lot in the lockdown. did you do anything else you did in the lockdown? I hope you can tell me more about the lockdown you had. bye From: Marsali
ok thx for coming on my blog and u have spent a long time on meh blog and u are trying to look at my screen so have a good day bro good job
ReplyDeletehi Ella - may that look like you like to sleeping in lockdown
ReplyDeletewhat did you do about no on to talk to?
lockdown was not fun for me was it for you . bye
Kia Ora Ella-Mey,
ReplyDeleteI like your thinking when you put the photo of your work on your blog. I think that putting more writing on your blog would make it even more better! It was amazing though!
Do you think your Lockdown was fun??